Love at first sight: Poetic Letter

Dear readers. You can read an excerpt of a new poetic letter entitled Love at first sight”


It has come one day

It crossed our path

In a crowded railcar


Hanging from a steel bar

The train suddenly braked

We are looked surprised


I was reading a fashion magazine

It were no photo, no lines

Love at first sight dazzled me (…)


You can read more on the site of poetic letters: The free thoughts

Thank you for your fidelity.

Categories: 1.Writing, 3. Poetic letters

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4 replies

  1. such a lovely love poem. I have been over to The Free Thoughts and there are poetic letters I really like! Is there a way to comment over there as well?
    groetjes, Francina

  2. A scene that you could direct and film..beautiful..

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